I was happy to see the question already asked, but sad that there is still no answer.
I was also trying to do the same derivation and proceeded in the same direction as the OP (is that the right term? Sorry this is my first time answering) and got a little stuck. After finding this question, and in the process of typing a reply, I actually managed to solve it completely :). Here is the proof.
The approach is very similar to the OP with one difference of the expectation $\langle M\rangle$ is defined. When exactly one red ball occurs in the last $n-k$ draws, then the number of remaining red balls is $M-1$. Now extending this we have number of remaining red balls, $M-1,M-2,\dots,M-(n-k)$ when the number of red balls drawn are $1,2,\dots,n-k$. Now using your definition of $P(RW_i|R_{\text{later}}B)=P(R_{k+1}R_{k+2}\dots R_{k+i} W_{k+i+1}\dots W_{n}|R_{\text{later}}B)$, the expectation is
$$
\langle M\rangle = \sum_{i=1}^{n-k} (M-k){n-k \choose i}P(RW_i|R_{\text{later}}B)
$$
Proceeding similarly to OP, we have $P(R_{\text{later}}|B)$ already derived and all that is left is to compute $P(RW_i|B)$. Now, using Eq (3.15) from the book, where we replace $n\rightarrow n-k, r\rightarrow i$, we get
$$
P(RW_i|B) \equiv P(R_1\dots R_i W_{i+1}\dots W_{n-k}) = \frac{M!(N-M)!(N-(n-k))!}{(M-i)!(N-M-(n-k-i))!N!}
$$
Substituting all the terms in the expectation and expanding binomial coefficients
\begin{align}
\langle M\rangle &= \sum_{i=1}^{n-k} (M-k){n-k \choose i}P(RW_i|R_{\text{later}}B)\\
&= \frac{{N \choose n-k}}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}(M-i){n-k \choose i} \frac{M!(N-M)!(N-(n-k))!}{(M-i)!(N-M-(n-k-i))!N!}\\
&= \frac{{N \choose n-k}}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}(M-i)\frac{(n-k)!}{(n-k-i)!i!} \frac{M!(N-M)!(N-(n-k))!}{(M-i)!(N-M-(n-k-i))!N!}\\
\end{align}
Now grouping the terms to form three binomial coefficients,
\begin{align}
=&\frac{{N \choose n-k}}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}(M-i)&\left[ \frac{(N-M)!}{(N-M-(n-k-i)!(n-k-i)!)} \right]\\
& &\left[ \frac{(N-(n-k)!(n-k)!)}{N!}\right]\\
& &\left[\frac{M!}{(M-i)!i!}\right]\\
\end{align}
\begin{align}
&= \frac{{N \choose n-k}}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}(M-i){N-M\choose n-k-i}{N\choose n-k}^{-1}{M \choose i}\\
&= \frac{1}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}(M-i){M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i}\\
\end{align}
At this stage the product of the two binomial coefficients inside the summation is similar to identity 3.79 from the book (which I found out has the name Vandermonde's identity) stated as
$$
{N1+N2 \choose r_a} = \sum_{r1=0}^{r_a}{N_1 \choose r_1}{N_2 \choose r_a-r_1}
$$
Split the summation into two terms as follows:
\begin{equation}
\label{eq1}
\langle M\rangle = \frac{1}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\left[M\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}{M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i} -\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}i{M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i}\right]
\end{equation}
Taking the first term and applying the identity:
\begin{align}
M\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}{M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i} &= M\left\{ \sum_{i=0}^{n-k}{M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i} - {M \choose 0}{N-M\choose n-k}\right\} \\
&= M\left\{ {N \choose n-k} - {N-M \choose n-k} \right\}
\end{align}
Taking the second term and applying the identity:
\begin{align}
\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}i{M \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i} &= \sum_{i=1}^{n-k}i\frac{M}{i}{M-1 \choose i-1}{N-M\choose n-k-i}\\
&= M\sum_{i=1}^{n-k}{M-1 \choose i-1}{N-M\choose n-k-i}\\
&= M\sum_{i=0}^{n-k-1}{M-1 \choose i}{N-M\choose n-k-i-1}\\
&= M{N-1\choose n-k-1}\\
\end{align}
Putting these two terms back in \ref{eq1} and taking the $M$ common,
\begin{align}
\langle M\rangle &= \frac{M}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\left[{N \choose n-k} - {N-M \choose n-k} - {N-1\choose n-k-1} \right]\\
&= \frac{M}{{N \choose n-k}-{N-M \choose n-k}}\left[{N \choose n-k} - {N-M \choose n-k} - {N-1\choose n-k-1} \right]\\
&= \frac{M}{{N \choose n-k} -{N-M \choose n-k}}\left[{N-1 \choose n-k}+ {N-1\choose n-k-1} - {N-M \choose n-k} - {N-1\choose n-k-1} \right]\\
&= \frac{M}{{N \choose n-k} -{N-M \choose n-k}}\left[{N-1 \choose n-k} - {N-M \choose n-k} \right]\\
\end{align}
Where, the third equality comes from using Pascal's identity: ${p\choose q} = {p-1\choose q}+{p-1\choose q-1}$.
Finally using $\langle M\rangle$ in $P(R_k|R_{\text{later}}B)$, we have the answer
\begin{equation}
P(R_k|R_{\text{later}}B) = \frac{M}{N-n-k}\times\frac{{N-1 \choose n-k} - {N-M \choose n-k}}{{N \choose n-k} -{N-M \choose n-k}}
\end{equation}